"Silly adventure"(cover)
One day, Gran went to stay. She had presents for the children! She had bought each of them a Super Squirter. The children went outside to play with the Super Squirters.
And, Gran had a surprise for Mum and Dad. She had some photograph albums. It was old photographs. Some of the photographs were of Mum when she was a little girl.After that, Biff and Chip went out to play. Gran showed Kipper some more photographs. They were all grey coloured.
Next day, Kipper put the television on. There was an old film about two men moving a piano. Then, Kipper turned off the television! He went to find Biff, but she wasn't in her room. Kipper saw that the magic key was glowing.
The magic took Kipper into a strange grey world. This was just like the film he saw on television. He want to go back home. This is a silly adventure!
And, the happening occurs, he took the magic key out of his pocket and banged it again. Suddenly the magic key began to glow.
Kipper was pleased the adventure was over. But the adventure was not over. Something had gone wrong! Kipper was a grey colour. He looked like an old photograph of himself. And, he tried to change clothes. But his top's turning grey.
Afterwards, the key returned to original of him. The magic worked just in time. He was able to return to former appearance.
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Hi, Saori,
返信削除I'm wondering: Is the content of this book review entirely original? That is, is it all your own ideas, in your own words?
I'd also like to know why you used the labels "essays" and "outlines" instead of "fiction" and "reviews".
Please let me know in class on Wed., May 25.
Cheers, PB